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Polvo, niebla y una meditada.. by alonsio Polvo, niebla y una meditada.. by alonsio
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Polvo neblina y una meditada deriva


De recuerdo nada más tengo,
La sensación de mis manos sujetándose ambas,
En una neblina helada, los pasos de ciervos
Aún borrados no eran mas que historias de papel de roneo viejo.

El paso de los camino, no descansan, ni menos duermen
Puñados de pájaros observan el diván de mi casa que parece lejano
Pero la dulce estela que no deja dormir en conjunto con la misteriosa
Laguna que desaparecida no tienen acuerdo para mendigar en mis bolsillos vacios.

Así es, nada, nada fue aquel día, quizás algún recuerdo que se me ha filtrado, un sincero desfile por unos cuantos kilómetros.
El polvo en mi cabeza, el frío de la neblina, el sol escondiéndose cuando arribé a mi hogar.
No sé cuanto estuve sentado sobre mi cama
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Lisa-Schneider Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart: your wonderful work is featured here:[link]
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MissUmlaut Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011   Photographer
Such a beautiful silent story
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sansblague Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
thaks once more.
This one is a dream!
sansblague
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iram Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011
SO delicate! :heart:
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karraka Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Buena selección para el tríptico. Es siempre muy resultona la niebla y como amante acérrimo del monocromo, celebro que lo hayas hecho en esta modalidad.

Quizas, la única foto que cambiaria sería la de la izquierda, buscaría una con más niebla aún.

Un saludo compañero. ;)
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011   Photographer
la imagen de la izquierda está a contra luz, por ende no se observa muy bien la niebla, las tres imágenes fueron tomandas en el mismo lugar, y gracias...
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karraka Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
A tí por compartirlas. ;)
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partiallyHere Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
that is beautiful :heart:
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
many thanks , hanna., hanna rigth?
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partiallyHere Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
it's Hanan :) (it's an arabic word that means tenderness)
you're welcome, i specially like this work!
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
ok.... =)
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KizukiTamura Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
your verses are really very good, perfect association with your pictures. congrats.
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
I wrote this morning
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:iconkizukitamura:
KizukiTamura Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
I was thinking to answer you with some verses of mine ...
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
do it...
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:iconkizukitamura:
KizukiTamura Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
I'll do.
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encorine Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
just perfect!!
i love 'El polvo en mi cabeza'! (google helped me to understand your words..)
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
MANY THANKS CORINNE
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ParallelDeviant Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
Tanto la poesía como el tríptico son geniales - :clap:
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
gracías
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ParallelDeviant Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
:thumbsup:
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fatboyslimgirl Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Professional Photographer
Hay me encanta tu poesia alonsio!!! esto es tuyo de ti no? :heart:
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
y porque no va ser de mi?
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fatboyslimgirl Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Professional Photographer
obviooo que se que siii pero pregunto por si acaso yo soy re ignoranta de poesia e/y libros :(
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   Photographer
oie ponte al msn... avisame
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fatboyslimgirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Professional Photographer
oye me conecte este finde y no estABAS bueno ahi nos vemos hiciste algo con las imagenes que te mande?
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011   Photographer
estoy aun trabajando en ello
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fatboyslimgirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Professional Photographer
:D oh you are here!
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alonsio Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011   Photographer
si...
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